Oh, this is great! I love your Ivan here. (I've actually just spent all evening writing for him myself.) He's young but not stupid, and Gregor is a bit of both, but at least seems to have learned his lesson. "Spelunking Extreme," ha. I can only imagine what Miles dragged them into. I just love the dynamic of friendship you have here between two very different characters. Great job. Hats off to you.

*goes to read the next one*