ext_23885 ([identity profile] devilmaycare.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] owl 2006-05-25 11:55 pm (UTC)

This was very impressively Bujold-esque - your Aral in particular was lovely, and all the dialogue sounded like something I would have expected to read in her work, very natural and in-character. Your Gregor is just the right mix of man and child, and everything here was just so poignant and lovely. The last line made me squeak with glee.


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