Really? *blushes* I was tweaking them a little bit this week, thinking of fnally getting wround to putting them up on ff.net.

I can do dialogue all day long, it's just plot I'm not so good at. Do you think I put in enough emotions and faces and stuff in the dialogue bits? I see where the characters are and what they look like very clearly, but them they just talk and talk and don't do anything else while they're talking. BTW, was it you that said s/he didn't like the Cordelia + Gregor part as well as Aral + Gregor?